Tuesday, July 1, 2008

Chapter 21


Is this a sneak peek...
I really didn't want to give too much away, so it's a bit short. Read it, love it, anyway!\
Edward's POV
The walls were somehow whiter than they were usually. I know I had been in this room countless times over the past 7 months, but it felt strange being here in my own.
I would never share another moment with Bella in this room. They would become memories.
But memories could fade. I knew these ones would not.
They would stay with me for my entire life.
It's not like they were the only things that I had.

10 comments:

Caitlin said...

I have got to say if you kill bella i will be ....extremly............ANGRY!! lol please don't let Bella die!!!

Anonymous said...

I'm with caitlin..... Dont you dare even do what I think your gonna do.. I am old enought to be your mom so you HAVE to listen to me!

bridgie said...

PLEASE...I BEG OF YOU!!!!!!!! DON'T KILL BELLA!!!! Or, are you trying to trick us by making edawrd say that being like, bella is never coming to the hospital again, please please please let her live!!

Katie said...

...if you KILL her, i will be VERY VERY pissed off.ALos, on a brighter note, lets hope he has his kids yeah?

Anonymous said...

Geezs!!! Why do you always have to do that!!! Your killing us here!!!!

sinsoo said...

I wouldn't mind if you kill Bella >.> Give a twist tot he story! So far there aren't any fanfics where she dies because of the birth! Or perhaps something happened, and Bella won't be able to conceive anymore? Thats more my guess than her dieing. I wouldn't mind if the kids die, heck. x3 I would actually be happy for change in preggie fanfics, no children die, and Bella never dies. Gets boring after awhile. xD Well, you are an awesome author I must admit. <3 If you did another fanfic I would propose to you. <3 Keep on writing!

~sinsoo

diana said...

please do not kill bella!!!!!!!!
i will be super pissed!
i bet bella dies andannie and henry live.
bad ending bc that would SUCK

sinsoo said...

please do not kill bella!!!!!!!!
i will be super pissed!
i bet bella dies andannie and henry live.
bad ending bc that would SUCK[/quote]


That would be awesome! 8D Or maybe they are moving somewhere... >.> I still think her not being able to have anymore children is the happiest. xD
Can't wait to see what you came up with. <3

~sinsoo

Anonymous said...

They would stay with me for my entire life.
It's not like they were the only things that I had.
ohkay so by that i take it that the twins didnt die and that maybe bella did? or the other way around. or bella didnt die nor the twins but she cant have any more kids. i like it you must update soon i love this story.

Anonymous said...

hmmmmmmm i think i'm almost with sinsoo because i do find it might be boring if it's the same thing over and over again; but i dont want bella nor annie and henry to die because i think this story needs a happy ending.

AL