Monday, July 14, 2008

Who We Are Ch.2

So I posted the next chapter! Yup. Hopefully you liked it. Not much to say, but if you have the time, could you vote for me over at topsites, my rank has gone down a lot. :) Would be appreciated. Keep a look out later today for a chapter for my new story.

Chapter 2 preview.

"Edward, I cannot ride a horse." I said directly, my face set. He just smiled and then came and stood right in front of me. He put a hand on either hip and looked down into my face. I couldn't help but look up at him.
"It's just a horse. A very pretty one, too. If you ride it with me through the village, every man will stare." He said.
"Is that a good thing then?"
"Yes, because I can glare at them all and make sure they know that you are mine." He leaned down and kissed me. I sighed.
"A horse, Edward? Couldn't they stare too if we walked?"
"No, because you'd be all sweatly and flustered by the time we got there, and the men wouldn't stare. They'd want to take you then and there." His lips moved to my throat. "I don't know if I could stop myself either." He moaned. I blushed.
"Fine. We'll ride."


Gr.. Is it just me or does TwilightArchives suck. I mean I love writing on it and everything, and I love those of you who review all the time. But every time I try to post a chapter.. it won't load. and then it says 'server disconnected' and I have to refresh it a million times before it will load. Sometimes I just think about not posting on it, but then I would miss out on all you wonderful people. :) It's got me flustered though.

2 comments:

Lily said...

dont stop posting on it!!! because then I wont be able to read it. and that would just Plain SUCK. lol
^_^

Caitlin said...

i know what you mean. I was going to post another chapter in my story, and then it did that, andi got so mad because that was the fifth time it did that to me. so i was mad. but please don't stop posting. it would be very sad!!