Thursday, July 3, 2008

What We Become Ch. 21



It is another short Sneak Peek. I really don't want to ruin it for you guys! But this kinda gives a big part away. Until tomorrow, this is all you get. :)
Ch. 22.


Edward's POV

I smile lightly. "How are you, Charlie?" I ask. I wait as he takes in a deep breath. He tries to smile, but it doesn't reach his cheeks.
"I thought I told you, Edward." Charlie says, shaking his head. He looks around the room and then frowns.
"You've told me many things of late, sir." I smile.
"I have. And have you listened to anything I said?" He shifts from foot to foot. I don't know why I notice these small things.
"What did I do this time?" I wink. He can't help but smile.
"Tell me a secret, Edward." He says.
"Excuse me?"
"You're the reason my grandchildren are away from me, so I'd like you to tell me a secret so I won't hate you anymore." His smile fades.


13 comments:

Anonymous said...

You are a wicked little thing arent you! You have to give us a break! Its not like its a book and its right in front of you and you keep reading.. its agony waiting until you update so please update the story! Did I mention that you need to update soon??!!

Anonymous said...

well telling by the mood and edward isn't crying i don't think bella dies, and if there was something really wrong a think edward would be really upset. SO well idk. Update soon so i will know.

sinsoo said...

Well, I have some things to admit to the awesome Kimz.
1.) iloveyou <3
2.) I am very happy that something depressing seems to be happening. <3 thats what makes this fanfic so unique.
3.) You are a pure genius.
4.) Marry me? ;3

~sinsoo

Anonymous said...

oh you are so very evil... i can't wait for you to update soon... *sighs* well... it looks like someone already puposed but... yeah... <3 foreverinfear

Anonymous said...

You are very mean! leaving us hanging like that, :( :( :(, you should be ashamed

LupsandTnks said...

I am ashamed. I'm sorry. *shakes head with guilt*
~Edward might not be crying because time has passed and he's in the depressed stage.
~And Marrying you, Sinsoo, ain't going to help me. Unless you're a guy. ;) lol.

I love you all too, but you're still going to have to wait!

sinsoo said...

Huh, is my name that unisex? O.o
But yeah, I'm a girl that acts more guyish, half the time. x3 But still.. one of us could get a sex transplant...

LupsandTnks said...

This has gone down the wrong road. Haha
Uhm.. No. lol

sinsoo said...

Awww... D: I'm heartbroken...
Can I still stalk you? *clings to your leg obsessively*

P.S I sent you a penguin... you can't see it though. it's invisible. >.>

diana said...

so bella dies and edward keeps the kids in that house he buys and this is in the future where edward is bringing the kids to visit charlie.
why might i ask does bella die?
ps-if she doesnt die then forget my whole comment. bc that would WAYY cooler

sinsoo said...

I think Bella has a miscarriage. And it would be to dangerous to have Bella pregnant again.

Anonymous said...

1) I <3 you
2) Bella beter not have died
3) please continue the story
4) waiting is KILLER
5) KILLER!!!!!!!
6) THIS BETTER END HAPPY!
7) I <3 you

Anonymous said...

hmmmm the sneek peeks dont help with answers ..... grrrr

and lol to sinsoo the #4 hehehee

AL