It is another short Sneak Peek. I really don't want to ruin it for you guys! But this kinda gives a big part away. Until tomorrow, this is all you get. :)
Ch. 22.
Edward's POV
I smile lightly. "How are you, Charlie?" I ask. I wait as he takes in a deep breath. He tries to smile, but it doesn't reach his cheeks.
"I thought I told you, Edward." Charlie says, shaking his head. He looks around the room and then frowns.
"You've told me many things of late, sir." I smile.
"I have. And have you listened to anything I said?" He shifts from foot to foot. I don't know why I notice these small things.
"What did I do this time?" I wink. He can't help but smile.
"Tell me a secret, Edward." He says.
"Excuse me?"
"You're the reason my grandchildren are away from me, so I'd like you to tell me a secret so I won't hate you anymore." His smile fades.
13 comments:
You are a wicked little thing arent you! You have to give us a break! Its not like its a book and its right in front of you and you keep reading.. its agony waiting until you update so please update the story! Did I mention that you need to update soon??!!
well telling by the mood and edward isn't crying i don't think bella dies, and if there was something really wrong a think edward would be really upset. SO well idk. Update soon so i will know.
Well, I have some things to admit to the awesome Kimz.
1.) iloveyou <3
2.) I am very happy that something depressing seems to be happening. <3 thats what makes this fanfic so unique.
3.) You are a pure genius.
4.) Marry me? ;3
~sinsoo
oh you are so very evil... i can't wait for you to update soon... *sighs* well... it looks like someone already puposed but... yeah... <3 foreverinfear
You are very mean! leaving us hanging like that, :( :( :(, you should be ashamed
I am ashamed. I'm sorry. *shakes head with guilt*
~Edward might not be crying because time has passed and he's in the depressed stage.
~And Marrying you, Sinsoo, ain't going to help me. Unless you're a guy. ;) lol.
I love you all too, but you're still going to have to wait!
Huh, is my name that unisex? O.o
But yeah, I'm a girl that acts more guyish, half the time. x3 But still.. one of us could get a sex transplant...
This has gone down the wrong road. Haha
Uhm.. No. lol
Awww... D: I'm heartbroken...
Can I still stalk you? *clings to your leg obsessively*
P.S I sent you a penguin... you can't see it though. it's invisible. >.>
so bella dies and edward keeps the kids in that house he buys and this is in the future where edward is bringing the kids to visit charlie.
why might i ask does bella die?
ps-if she doesnt die then forget my whole comment. bc that would WAYY cooler
I think Bella has a miscarriage. And it would be to dangerous to have Bella pregnant again.
1) I <3 you
2) Bella beter not have died
3) please continue the story
4) waiting is KILLER
5) KILLER!!!!!!!
6) THIS BETTER END HAPPY!
7) I <3 you
hmmmm the sneek peeks dont help with answers ..... grrrr
and lol to sinsoo the #4 hehehee
AL
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